The Year 7 students are on camp. The Year 6 students and Miss Paterson have been left behind! What to do? HAVE A PAJAMA POETRY DAY with our teddybears! We have listened to pajama poems, teddy bear poems and stories.
But what have we learned?
We have been learning how to write a free verse poem. We wrote our own poems about our Teddy Bears or our Pajamas. Please read them. Just click on 'comments' below this post. Enjoy!
MY POOR SAD TEDDY
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There he sits
Abandoned
To this day
Never loved
Stranded
On the shelf
Just a little
Untouched
Fragment
Of when
I was young
He sits there
Thinking
I'm so lonely
So invisible
I haven't been touched
In four years
Never been happy
Why can't
Someone appreciate me?
A TEDDY'S LEGACY
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I wondered why
These past years
I was forgotten
Wanting to be loved
Again.
My loneliness increasing
My cuddle-me-now attitude.
It's been two years
Left down in this infinite
Land.
Trapped between
My beloved
Resting place
And
A polished wooden cliff.
I've had a good life
so far.
Now and again
A fragment of memory
Slips my mind.
I'm slowly
Losing hope.
Until
One morning
Lying there
Half alive
Barely asleep
From my eternal position
So uncomfortable
The master came
All those memories.
I had lost
Were restored
Now
I am an honoured beacon
Of hope.
I sit on my beloved resting place
Clean and soft as ever.
A true story.
WHY ARE THEY HERE
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I snuggle up
In my cosy bed
Why
Are they here?
Are they here
for hugs
and kisses?
To be loved
To pieces
For ice cream
So contrate
Coming back to life
I remember
Why they're here
Right
They're in your heart.
WHY OH WHY
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Why oh why
Am I under here
All alone
So
Oh so scared
A big black cat
Is biting me
My arm
It is hanging off
I'm hurt
Someone
Help me
My super soft fur
Is everywhere
My lovely owner
Where are you?
Your cat is
attacking me
TEDDY DAY
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Off and on
Hugs and snuggle
For so long
With my cuddles.
Love with you
Love with me
Shiny tired
Off to bed.
MY PAJAMAS
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The lovely warmth
And cosiness
Of my special
Frog Pajamas
Brings joy
And love to me
At night
When I go
To bed
Makes me feel
So comfortable
I think the frogs
Are undercover spies
Who look after
And protect me
While I sleep
Through the pitch
Black night
I wake up the next morning
The first thing that I do
Is to say hello to my PJs
And give them a big thanks
The soothing thought of
Relaxing
On my bed
When I get to say
Good night
I love my
Fabulous
Pajamas
I love them just the way they are!
A LOST TEDDY
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A lost teddy,
A lovely teddy,
Trapped,
In the dark,
Dark,
Wardrobe,
Scared,
Sad,
Terrified.
That he wouldn't,
Be found
But then,
I open the door.
I pick him up,
Hug him,
And
Play with him,
In the
Sun.
TEDDIES
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I wonder
What
It's like
Being a Teddy Bear.
All alone
Covered
In
A blanked
Of dust
All tattered
And ripped.
With
Nothing to do
But cry
Until
He plays
With me
Of course.
We liked
To run
Around
Outside
Then
At night
We would
Gaze
At
The stars
WITHOUT YOU
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I'm all alone
Up here
by myself.
I'm waiting
Just for you
To return.
Sitting
In fear
With no one else.
"Hurry up clock,"
I cry
"Move faster
I need you
Here
With me."
You bring me
The biggest of joy
When you laugh
With gladness.
Come back
To me
Let me
Happy and cosy
With you.
I feel at home with you
And only you.
COME HOME
So we can
Snuggle and huggle
Together, forever.
FORGOTTEN
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I sit here
Waiting
Under a pile of jackets.
Hoping
Praying
That someone
Will find me.
I'm love-able
I'm cute
Somebody
Love me
Please.
I see a ray of hope
My escape plan close by
Sadly
I'm closed out
I must wait.
A new hope
They pick me up
They love me
I'm loved
I'm kept forever.
THE LONELY TEDDY BEAR
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I sit staring
Into space
All alone
I don't see
Anyone
It's just me
Here
All alone
I sit
On the bed
Wondering
Where
Have you gone
You fill me with passion
But only you
My big eyes
Are watering
I miss you
Come home
And be
With your
Teddy bear
Wow they are awseome free verse Poem's we wrote the one I really Like is Micheal's Nice job. They other's were so cool to (: You are the best teacher Ever Miss Paterson!!!
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ReplyDeleteThese Poems are really godd, the one that I enjoyed the most was Levi's. He had really good descriptive language and the emotions that he wanted to people to feel came to me straight away!!! But that goes to everyone, I love them all!!!
Are party was super fun if MRs Oliver wad here she would never let us do it.I was walking to my mums in my pj s.Cant wait til I sleep with my teddys tonight with lots of loves.We also watched a movie with lots of junk food and snuggles with our teddys.It was so much fun and had a amazeing day.
ReplyDeleteThese poems are good! Well done guys. I am really proud of the effort you put in today. I was really impressed with the quality of the discussions before you started planning your poems and the thoughtful comments and ideas you came up with. I'm glad that you enjoyed the day Jake. Mrs Olivier would have let us. She would have loved to have been there to join us. You guys really earned the movie time. I can't wait to see the notes you made about the movie in your Writers Notebooks. Thank you everyone for a lovely day.
ReplyDeleteGreat poems guys you gave it one hundred percent.Nathan your poem was touching.I like the langue William used.I can relate to Billy"s poem.Levi I think this was one of your best pieces of writhing.Jake your poem was a very happy poem unlike most of the others.Joe I think that teddy thoiught that.Dane I wonder aboutthat too.Katie think your teddys and my teddys think that.I lov your poem Micheal.Thank you so much Miss Paterson I had the time of my life!!! ;)
ReplyDeleteYer Miss Paterson! We had lot's of fun but did some good poem's. YOUR THE BEST TEACHER EVER!!!
ReplyDeleteLevi here.thanks Jessie your poem is really good to !!!=D
ReplyDeleteYeah... BEST TEACHER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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